I think that my personal essay turned out honest. I was hard to tap into those feeling but I think that I accomplished what I was going for. I think that my essay helps people to understand what I've gone through and maybe what other people in their lives have gone through. My focus was that you will get over things when you least expect it and when you get over it you aren't truly over it. I hope this makes sense. When you loose someone you can deal with the emotion but the pain may still linger. I will always wish that my father was still around.
I really don't know what I'm not happy with. I probably will know when more poeple read it and give me feedback. I hope that every sees my paper the way that I want it to be percieved. I hope that with this essay no one feels bad for me, thats the worst. Yeah I lost my dad when I was 17 but everyone goes through something tragic so I don't think that I am any differant. I need help with my confidence in my writing. I always think that I did something horribly wrong and that everyone thinks that my apaper doen't meet the standards. I am overall really happy with how it turned out and can't wait to see how my paper can grow.
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